All Comments on 'When the Hero Looses'

I don't have time to waste with authors who don't know the difference between 'loose' and 'lose'. If you have such a blatant misspelling in the TITLE, I can't even imagine how poorly written the actual story is.

your story was AMAZING! i had never read anything like it. i would appreciate it if you slowed down a little on the transformation scenes, because they were over too soon.

great story, please keep writing...

If you like horror movies/stories then you might like some of this poorly told tale. Besides the wrong words and spelling errors, the hate filled story concept really bothered me. If your writing is to improve then please pick a better backdrop for your attempt(s) and then you could stand a chance, this one was worse than awful. Please don't spread this blankity-blank again. Other than that, it was only marginally bad.

It's a shame there's no sequel, would have loved to read it. I for one can look past spelling and grammatical errors to the actual story...