by greysequoia
As with your previous chapters, this is just as good if not better. I have to say that if you haven't experienced the lifestyle personally, your grasp and knowledge of details, feelings of all participants, and description of all the facts is SPOT ON. Perfection in writing is what you've achieved. Please keep more coming.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the feedback. This is all fantasy, not anything I've experienced, so I'm glad it feels realistic.
Three days been captured? Where did that come from? I thought this was next day - R