All Comments on 'Wife's Wedding Mis-Adventure'

Pretty good, i love the repair jobs on unfinished stories, or stories that were left hanging.

so AP had a 10' shlong, and hubby was 6 inches shorter... so hubby had 4 inches.

I know some dudes are small, not that they have a choice.

how long until wife looks to hook up again, even when she was caught, she was still considering repeats... hell, any average 6 inch dude will seem like a bull.

Drunk, dressing like a slut and a husband who's more into talking with all his 'brawz' than paying attention to his wife and a predator on the dance floor... what could possibly go wrong, right?

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GREAT finish, as usual!!!

I Was Slumming

And read this one again. It dawned on me when reading this line "...according to this that means oral, anal or vaginal intercourse with anyone but me,..." that there were some Clintonesque loopholes here such as hand jobs and finger fucks just for starters. I'm leaving out things like tentacles, sucking toes and licking armpits as those seem to be more along the lines of JAV fetishes. Still like the home runs with the bat, clearing the air with Darrin and Annie's use of the rumors about the other wives. Even Ralph got what he deserved as did the others. Signed: BTW

Very nice.

You please try to continue and complete "My Education by Nicholas Templair" in Mature category.

For the past 2 days i read most of your stories.

Very good writing.

Damn

So she got away with it? That's all I can think about. Still a great tale, but she fucked a kid and got away with it. How many years in prison do you get for assaulting a minor? Think about it.

It's RAAC. The cheater wasn't really punished.

Unique story

Enjoyed the story, payback was a bitch so the 18 year old asshole and his friends. She di seem remorseful and I guess over time she could earn his trust and forgiveness. Well done 5 stars

Worst FTDS story, basically dry humping the kid on the dance floor, a suck & fuck in the men's room, then denies it, and only after she's caught does remorse set in and she plays the "I was drunk" card. Bitch deserved the Hey Joe treatment.

Irishdragon's story was a straight up by the numbers pathetic small dicked closeted writers erotic bowel movement.

Sadly this turned out little better, though it couldnt have been any worse.

I liked it better than the original attempted "stroke" story. The MC at least gets kind of even with the kid who "cuckolded" him, especially after the kid loses a testicle, and any chance of a college scholarship. Darren getting beat up probably didn't help either. At least people around town will know not to mess with Frank or his wife.

For awhile I seen others boasting of FTDS stories, these last two are I've read are fucking pathetic.

I don’t know about this. I’d missed this one in the past. But he makes his choice. I think he should have a maintenance night or weekend every fortnight where she accepts the belt across her ass and pays for her sin. Let’s say for six months or better a year.. even things up.

Scores 3/5 but l want to give it less.

A CUCKOLD STORY

5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Once again, OUTSTANDING!

Never see the end, before ‘the end’

🌟🌟🌟🌟 I really liked the story. But, the wife got off way too easy.

Another undeserved RAAC from a sad pathetic cuckold husband. Why do you claim that you don’t write about willing cuckolds when clearly you do? One star for lying in the intro.

Great ending.

Thanks.

Ed

Good enough to stand in its own.

While at the end of the day Annie should have kept her legs together, Frank needs to own up to the fact he is equally to blame

Instead of getting so engrossed in talking to his mates he should have opened his eyes.

His wife is 27, looking hot, an 18 year old boy is keen to look after his wife and repeatedly dance with her.

An 18 yr old hanging around you wife where there is drink involved should ring alarm bells regardless, most drunk 18 yr old blokes will fuck any female with a heart beat

If you are going to let other people dance with your wife, especially somewhere where there is drinking, you should have one eye on them.

Regardless of how much you trust your wife, It is more keeping an eye on the blokes and there actions and cut in and warn off anyone who steps out of line.

And it should be 2 dances at most, then you should be out there dancing with her, if you suck at dancing just hold her tight, feel her body against yours.

If your not prepared to keep the wolves at bay (especially horny 18 yr olds) and stop unwanted advances, stop them from plying her with drink, maybe doctored drinks, why cry when the wolves take her.

Frank deserved a payback beating from Darren with the statement "next time lookout for your wife, don't expect a drunk 18 yr old's cock to have a conscience, it was as much your fault as his"

FTDS didn't have a lot to work with with this story and took the ending so that Frank got some "manhood" back.

I am giving it a 4*,

I couldn't give a 5* because i think Frank deserved a slap up the back of his head more than Booby deserved such a severe beating, although the fact he brought mates for the second go nearly pushed it there

So much better than the original!

Somehow it works. Cannot be the husband was so clueless and trusting to let her grind on the young asshole and then be led away for 40 minutes. She was drunk off her ass and randy as hell. Since it was based on the original, this author was stuck with the standard dumb 10 inch big cock LW trope. In a world where a thick 8 inches is porn star material (Peter North is 8 inches in reality) and puts a man at the top fraction of a percent of size, then 10 inches is like 1 in a 100,000. Heck Lexington Steel is 9.5 inches but had surgery to remove the ligament underneath giving him another inch (and a dick that hangs weird and has some issues staying hard; lot of fluffing action!). But somehow in these stories every white guy with a big dick (and they are apparently common) is 10 inches and every black guy is 12 inches. Whatever. I only bring this up because somehow the force of her orgasms, her fantasy about the sex with the kid, his big cock, etc, were never discussed in the reconciliation. She helped him get revenge defended him vs Darren, the asshole's older brother, gave the tip about Jane's marriage day gangbang (annulment anyone?), stopped drinking, and gave him a postnuptial and a free pass. And some counseling. So yeah she gets randy as hell and turned on when drunk (as evidenced by her desire to.get her husband back home before the discovery blew her up), but nothing affects her husband about how he can he hope to compete with his average (maybe below average?) penis, especially since she planned that night (while drunk) to fuck thr young punk again. So yeah a lot of other things were intriguing. Besides his opening idiocy (inherited from the original story) and the stupid 10 inch cock trope (boring), the stirybhad a lot of good elements and thr husband took no prisoners in his interrogation and payback. But yeah the sexual inadequacy angle.is going to be a big problem. He is was five feet away pissing from where she was cumming her brains out. That is hard to swallow. Pun intended. As an aside a bit nuts that the kid cums like four times in 30 minutes (handjob, blowjob, two loads in her vagina). Really? That fast? Yet the wex gor her is cosmic?

Great payback for little bitch Bobby and his friends

A bit tame by your usual standard so 4*

What about the slutty outfit?

Not anything after the beginning.

Drunk used in more stories as excuse. Knew she got randy when drunk!

Easy answer don't get drunk!

Once the first infidelity occurs………….virtually the walls are down forever. The slut can no longer regain virtue and each betrayal is easier to do than the previous transgression. This is why men and women must assert the one and done rule with an errant spouse. If you are confronted with an hysterical wife that says she can’t give you up……reassure her you will fuck her with a condom after the divorce when she needs you….up to the point you have a new relationship. She won’t need that condition as you will find her always willing to fuck even when she has her new man. Remember each infidelity makes the next easier…….so utilize the one and done rule…….as for the marriage The fucking can go on for you up to your next exclusive relationship. She won’t worry much about being exclusive anymore….exclusive won’t effect her fucking any number of guys going forward…..so don’t forget the condom. R. H.

I liked how it ended. This worked. I'm usually BTB but this turned out well. Thanks

You wrote a story that strikes at the heart,dignity too of the man Frank.But! 2 thing you screwed up on? 1 Frank signing the legal papers of this aggreement with Annei,it's a big mistake.She knows she did something fucked up.she knows Frank's wrath now,and she's trying to dodge the cross hairs of future revenge that will leave her scared.she can't control that,everybody knows.No matter how sorry or repented she is she trying to get leverage.The fucking arrogance or desperation of making out a legal papered aggreement of him retaliating back at her.Annei is deliberately nullifying the payback she gonna get.Frank should take the papers an shove it down her throat.2If I know this and Frank knows too,Annei took a full load of Bobby's spunk in her womb there's no mention that she's on the pill,so I'm guessing she's already pregnant.That poor guy Frank is going to ask about her pregnancy,is she going to keep it?I repeat poor Frank his wife pregnant with a young punks baby what's he gonna do? He can tell Annei this (if your keeping the baby,pack your shit an get out along with your walking papers.)Frank can never demand to terminate the pregnancy do to Roe vs Wade even worse R vs W has been attack an overturned on 6-24-2022.Now adding this along it doesn't look good for Frank,betrayal,disrespect,cuckold an humiliation.I'd say get rid of that pregnant slut.have the attorney to prepare future documents when Bobby comes of legal age,let him pay up the child support.Or he can be a big man about it(wishful thinking on my part.)forgive an Raise the bastard child and the psychological damage of a stretch out cunt through out the years in this marriage.The Frank character should bail out fast.As for Annei the stupid pregnant slut,it will be the final nail in the sex the moment Frank's put his cock in your pussy.you will look at the expression on his face,he will not keep silent to tell you your cunt can take a 747 an park it like a maintenance bay I won't be wanting any more, but! I'll make a trade I raise the the kid in this fucked up marriage in trade for fucking other women.In Annei's thoughts knowing full well her cunt is now worth shit any more,the thought of her husband that she destroyed be looking for hot tight pussy to feed his cock.in her mind she'll be scared an screwed through out the marriage she can give Frank her mouth and ass if it has any worth,if Frank gets a women pregnant she should shut the fuck up.she had her first born now he'll have his.Annei want to make this marriage work? Make sacrifices bitch.keep the toxicity away from the kid an other future kid your husband will have with other women.You women have R vs W oops! You don't Frank has every right a man's right to pay you back for all the damages Annei caused.Annei has a choice too take her pregnant slut ass an bail never to be seen again especially knowing what's coming down the tracks ahead.Like I sead you didn't cover these 2things or what thee event should be.Not good and no rating sorry I hope you do better good luck bye.

Bobby got exactly what he deserved, Anne not so much.

This is one of FTDS's better story conclusions. What's more, it was wittily told. Thanks. And it restored the husband's dignity, which is what's lost from such infidelity. I had a wife in my 30s who was a serious alcoholic whose libido got publicly out of control and which caused serious disrespectful conduct to me and my friends. That included infidelity. So we divorced only after many months of painful walking on eggshells and waffling before I pulled the plug on the marriage because she wouldn't recognize the alcoholic caused behavior. Reconciliation can only happen with BOTH demonstrated remorse and the offending spouse some kind of restitution. This one did both. The retributive violence was overboard, but the humorous wifey backup and rumor mongering made that palatable too. All in all, one of FTDS's better effort. Too bad he/they didn't continue writing.

the beating of the young men was a little vicious.

also should have had the wife tell him to bring the panties... or she could have done that on her own, as a bizarre way to regain some of her husband's trust back.

the other wives that were cheating was a little too convenient but that's fine.

Enjoyed this a fair bit honestly. the original and this conclusion.

An interesting but tad too brutal FTDS story. But it bares some important truths, reconciliation after cheating requires more than just demonstrated remorse. It requires making restitution to restore the offended spouse's dignity. It's true for either man or woman. For this one, it was a post-nuptial agreement and her pledge to refrain from drinking. In reality, his trust would have been directly proportional to her seeking help for alcoholism. Also in reality, a young marriage survival would have been weighted by the presence of children. Without, most would kick the spouse to the curb. My first marriage fresh out of college was to a wonderful 24 yr-old woman in a circle of college friends who partied a lot. Trouble was, she was a budding alcoholic who didn't see the problem until she drunkenly cheated in our third year with a friend's younger brother after a party. Unlike the story here, we ended up divorced because she could not to deal with her alcoholism despite her tearful and sad remorse. A very nice woman, but not to be trusted. So, although a bit too brutal, this story covers the basics in fine FTDS imagined fashion. Sometimes I wish I had battered my friend's younger brother too, but crippled him? No. So, 4 stars. Five had it been a bit less vicious. Needs more of the tongue-in-cheek bent of the author Saddletramp.

Raac ruined it.

Muy divertido

Me gustó,v

Gracias a los autores!!

Pretty hard on the stupid 28 year old, with little consequence to the wife who had promised fidelity! If it was more Rapey and less consenting by the wife, then the RAAC would be OK, but that wasn't the case. Although justice was partially satisfied, best I can give is a 2.

I liked the vicious, you don't go after a married person (either way!) it's wrong no matter what. I'm not much for organized religion but some of rules make st espouse I respect marriage vows (traditional) are one, thou shalt not commit adultery is another. Ther was a fairly recent version of "The Ten Commandments were a pair of adulterers were stoned to death, it was disturbing but satisfying as justice goes.

"In vino veritas"

Drunkenness reveals the person hidden BEHIND the facade shown to others when sober.