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Click hereBrooklyn sat up and looked seriously at her. His was a gentle, loving stare. He kissed Kelly. His lips were softer and more tender than his previous kisses. The urgency was no longer in them but she knew his desire was only momentarily leashed.
"Real love is never easy. It is not easily obtained, nor is it easily maintained. But it's real and we have it. I will be there for you always. I cannot walk away from you even if I wanted to. Our species mates for life."
Kelly's eyes widened at this and she pushed away from him. "What? You mate for life? What the hell does that even mean?"
"We choose a mate and we stick with them until death forces us otherwise."
Her head reeling, Kelly pushed herself into a sitting position and slid far away from the gargoyle. She stared hard at the cars that zoomed below but saw only panic in their glaring red and white lights.
"I know it's hard for you to trust, Kelly. After the attack and all. . ."
"It isn't from the attack. Maybe I'm happy being alone? Maybe I don't want to 'mate for life'. Maybe I liked being my own person and living my own life."
Brooklyn let out a sigh that was heavy with pain. Kelly felt like she had just committed murder but was too prideful to tear her stubborn gaze from the traffic. Suddenly, she was struck from behind and her body fell from the bridge.
A horrified scream erupted from deep inside her throat as she twisted in the air, frantically clawing at nothingness. One of her flailing hands struck Brooklyn's solid frame and he grabbed that hand and pulled her into his grasp. She breathed a sigh of relief until she realized that his wings were not catching the breeze. With eyes glowing their angry white glare, he kept his wings angled and tight to his body. They were falling towards certain death.
- COMMENTS
countrygirlflaalmost 11 years agoA great story line,well written...BUT,,its been over 7 months since this chapter was posted,,is this another one that just leaves us hanging,,would be a shame for this to end up with so many other unfinished stories on here....
PinkPantheressalmost 11 years agoPlease please don't tell me we are going to being hanging on to long. That was a wicked place to leave us. Looking forward to lots more.
Anonymousover 11 years agoLOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!! I watched the show with my oldest daughter & would love it if you did more and found love for all the Gargoyles!!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoSince this is fanfiction of sorts using characters from the gargoyles TV show, you should add "celebrities" as a tag. That seems to be the literotica custom. ;) You're off to a good start so far. :)
KerrBear85over 11 years agoAuthorThe dialogue thing, that is because of the way it uploaded. I have to go back and put a space in between every single one of my paragraphs are I upload them because of formatting issues. Sometimes I miss one here and there.
As for the STD thing, meh. It's a fiction story. In the fiction world, I believe sex should be enjoyed without the fear of disease. But thank you for the advice. It certainly would be a concern in the real world.
You'd be surprised how strong and open-minded Kelly is. She loves Brooklyn and Brooklyn is no fool and knows this. Kelly has problems settling down with anything, but then no one has been strong enough to make her stay. Let's just leave it at that.
You should also watch the Gargoyles series to find out why the there are few gargoyles left and why they were cursed to stone. This is fan fiction off from that series. :)
canndover 11 years agoi really like this story. alot. I think it is really imaginative and different. i can't believe that ending though! that is a mean cliffhanger...you have to update soon. I am not sure why he'd do that. Is it to prove she can trust him? I can't see that convincing her to be with him. Hadn't she been through enough from the rape?
One thing that's a reality that i think you should add is her getting tested for STD's. I mean, you have her in this world so that is something she'd have to do. I think he needs to tell her if he has mated her, why he didn't tell her this and give her the chance to decide to be his mate. She isn't one of his kind, so she can't possibly have known. I am sure sleeping with him wasn't enough to make them mates. I'm also intrigued by what happened to his people and why. Why was a spell put on them and by whom? I hope you'll tell us more about that.
One editing note, with the parts quoting the character's words, if you change to the other speaker you start a new paragraph. It makes it much clearer too b/c you aren't trying to decide who is speaking.
