All Comments on 'Wings of Fate Ch. 01'

I like the way you started your story, giving only vague bits of information. that being said, i can't wait for the next chapter.

good luck on your writing

good start ..more plzzz :)

This story looks promising :) Can't wait to hear more.

This comes across as a juvenile piece of work, with the characters displaying immature responses. One can only imagine that the author deems it necessary but it adds nothing to the characters.