All Comments on 'Wings of Fate Ch. 01'

This comes across as a juvenile piece of work, with the characters displaying immature responses. One can only imagine that the author deems it necessary but it adds nothing to the characters.

This story looks promising :) Can't wait to hear more.

good start ..more plzzz :)

I like the way you started your story, giving only vague bits of information. that being said, i can't wait for the next chapter.

good luck on your writing