All Comments on 'Wish You Were Here'

by RoxyTheCarnieQueen

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Nightowl22Nightowl22about 17 years ago
This is really a good story.

I think we need to know why he isn't here, though!! He just up and left? He's away working on a job? He left for another woman [Can't imagine that one].

Hope he comes home! He would get a really warm, loving welcome!! Actually, hot!

If he doesn't come back maybe I could stop by and check on you!

Alvaron53Alvaron53about 17 years ago
Smokin'

Very hot story.

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Now tell us why they're not together. Please. ;)

DoctorWyldcardDoctorWyldcardabout 17 years ago
Wow

I agree with the other commenters, this is fantastic.

I also agree, why did he leave? What did he do? What did she do? Why?

Wow, This is a great little story and I hope to the gods that you keep writing. Great job here.

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