by maggot420
Please keep up the series, i want to know what happens next.
This story is great. Loved the first and second chapters. Definitely looking forward to the third chapter.
Ahhh!!! I want more! This is the only story that has captured my attention in a very long while. Keep 'em coming for the sake of all our sanity's! LoL
~Diiz
A story worthy of hardbound and backed covers, perhaps consider taking a job in a literary profession?
excellent the plot is thickening i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter please don't stopp here
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please make it soon. Your writing style is great.
Your story is of interest. Please publish the next chapter soon.
You just can't keep us waiting this long for a third chapter. I got to find out what Lilith's aunt who is obviously an elder witch is going to say and do.
You are on to something really creative here...
Dig deep...and finish the story.
This was looking pretty good. Characters were a tad weak but the story had promise. I always hate to be left hanging.
Alright, your story line brought us here, now what? Where is chapter 3??