All Comments on 'Wolf's Kiss Ch. 07'

by TemptedAngel

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
300+ years old

You make him an ordinary 30-year old. Very hard to believe he is from 1692. Nothing shows for it.

Ladywolf1Ladywolf1over 10 years ago

This story has taken a very nice turn. W knew that Marisa was in love with Gerard, she just did not want to know it. Shayna and Jake are so cute. But 350 years that is a long ime to wait for your mate.

ToyamochaToyamochaalmost 12 years ago

I want my own wolf.....I'm so turned on by the attraction the mates have to each other

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
The

things that the alphas seem to do for the one that they are mated to are just mind blowing. Keep it coming...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please don't end it here...

I am enraptured by their stories. Please continue to write about Jake and Shayna and Marissa and the rest of their families.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOover 12 years ago
Big ass WOW!

How did i miss this story damn! This story has captured my passion for Weres and i want to read more. Well done, please post next chapter. muahhh Merry Xmas..

claireacquiredclaireacquiredover 12 years ago

I hope this story continues...I am totally hooked!

sweetie86sweetie86over 12 years ago
PLEASE... OH PLEASE....

WRITE MORE I'M SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY... GREAT READ!

Avidreader99Avidreader99over 12 years ago
This is it Tempted Angel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please come back and post the next chapter. This is just off the Chain, I'm going crazy over Jake my future wolfen babydaddy and I'm missing his lovin and everythang! LOL

Gabrielle1986Gabrielle1986over 12 years ago
omg

Ive read all the Werewolf stories on this site and THIS IS THE BEST ONE YET!!!

Please finish! you are amazing. I love that you dont have these annoying characters who try to run away from their mate. I love how well you have written Shayna...there is so much passion and the sex scenes are written better than any best selling writer!

:-)

icegirl81icegirl81over 12 years ago
OH MY :)

Could you please hurry with a new chapter, I absolutely love this story :)

KissmintKissmintover 12 years ago
Can't wait any longer!

I need to read more! Oh please don't end the story and post soon! Absolutely delicious!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome read

Can't wait to read this next chapter, hurry back soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
:O This should be a book.

You, oh fantastic author person, need to write more. Now, if possible. This story is cute in that way that's not really 'cute' (more ravishingly hot) but it makes ya grin to read it anyway.

-giggle-

Are the females as possessive of their mates as the males are? That could be fun with that Claire person mentioned before? (:

So...it would make us readers veeeery happy if you happened to pop on and post another loooooooooooooooooong chapter. Did I mention loooooooooooooooooong? :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very good

please come back to us and give us more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing story as well as the writer... : )

I found you while searching tonight and I read all 7 chapters. I can't wait for more. You are a talented writer and I'm thrilled I stumbled onto this series.

rosamundirosamundiover 12 years ago
I'm wetting *myself* waiting for the next chapter! :)

But I have twins and grad school and moving and a disability preventing my own story updates, so I'm not gonna nag YOU. *grin* I feel fortunate to read this story at all, I can wait for quality writing like this. :)

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Holy smoke!!!!

My God..........my God............oh my God. Such a delicious telling to be sure. Now darlin' when can we expect the next installment? You are an enchanting weaver and your public eagerly awaits more. Please don't keep us waitin' too long,

This segment was exquisite with a glass of cabernet. Thank you.

devilcowgurl6devilcowgurl6over 12 years ago
great story!

Can't wait for the next chapter hope its posted soon!

ladybug71ladybug71over 12 years ago
Great story so far....

I have been watching out for more editions to this story and I am glad I found this new one. You are a great writer and this is one awesome story!! Please keep the chapters coming!!!!!! Thank you!! :)

arelativearelativeover 12 years ago
stop your worrying....

loving the series cant wait for more...

and to the previous posters that think its gonna be dropped.... its barely been a month since the chapter came out judging by previous gaps in chapters being posted id estimate atleast another 3 months before another chapter... and thats if its finished quickly with no real world delays

but then again that is all my thinking the writer would have to back that up or even tell me im a complete idiot :)

anyways.... well written story with no spelling mistakes and nice characters nothing better :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Really good story

Hope we won't have to wait a long time for the next chapter. I am dying to learn what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
You aren't thinking of stopping with this series are you?

Because I think everyone agrees....more more more!!!!

Avidreader99Avidreader99almost 13 years ago
Rolls over the floor in love with this story

OMG PLease please hurry soon with this delicious nugget of JOY!!!

also bring some intense love making in the next chapter

I LOVE IT!!!AWW

pureeninnocentpureeninnocentalmost 13 years ago
awesome

Reading this story is all I have done today in my spare time. I can't wait for the next one to come out. Keep up the great work.

princess_alenaprincess_alenaalmost 13 years ago
it's so wonderful!

please update soon on the next chapter. i can't stop thinking about what comes next. don't keep us waiting like the other chapters.. it's getting really good. thank you for sharing your story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!

i'm so hooked in this story... PLEASE... PLEASE... PLEASE... Don't keep as waiting for the next chapter... update soon on what comes next. i can't wait. thank you for the great story and for sharing it with us here on lit.

willieonewillieonealmost 13 years ago
Ah huh!

With Shayna's great gran being a were when she had her kids it should make it easier for her to be changed as well since she has were in her dna, even watered down by a couple of generations.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 13 years ago

What an incredible chapter! It conveyed very intense emotions in all the characters. Great writing! I hope to see more soon.

willieonewillieonealmost 13 years ago
Thank you for...

finally posting this chapter is was wonderful now let's hope the next one will not take so long to post.

strawberrycandystrawberrycandyalmost 13 years ago

i love it! i hope you would write more about gerard and marisa! please please please continue with the story as soon as you can. thanks!

392OhMyGoodness392OhMyGoodnessalmost 13 years ago

I am really liking the way this story is progressing.

-392OhMyGoodness

bearmad1963bearmad1963almost 13 years ago
Good Story

Please don't leave it too long before you post a nother chapter.

Rudegal74Rudegal74almost 13 years ago
Damn it man......

This update was a long time coming and I am seriously hoping that we are further along before my next b-day (March). Now all that said will not negate the fact that if not, I will be waiting around with everyone else for you to post up cause this is really a very good storyline and one of few with a woman, let alone a man, of color.

Do your thang, cause I will be waiting.

DragonElf639DragonElf639almost 13 years ago
Love it

But please don't make us wait 3 months again, I forget what happens in the preceding rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
omg

plz continue i love it.

warmicw30warmicw30almost 13 years ago
loveeeeeeeeeeee

love your story but hate the long waiting ,so pls donot take so laong

dprincessdprincessalmost 13 years ago
Consistency!

Loved the story but couldn't help but notice that Marisa transitioned from Shayna's grandmother to great-grandmother mid-chapter.

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

great story, I couldn't stop reading it. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfalmost 13 years ago
Awesome!

Gotta go back and remind myself of the rest. This was really good! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
welcome back!!!

Great chapter.. I loved how you have put all the pieces together. Please keep writing and don't keep us waiting too long.

*****

naughty_nannaughty_nanalmost 13 years ago

Great chapter. Please don't make us wait that long. More more more please!

lucianloverlucianloveralmost 13 years ago
yey!

You're alive!!!!!!!

SilverCrestSilverCrestalmost 13 years ago
LOVE IT!

I have been waiting for this installment for a very long time! I absolutely loved it. Can't wait for more!

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