by lilgirlsix
Well, you just gave me the first boner in almost a month. Combined with good plot, and i must say: congrats!
"Why'd he have to be such a prick about it?"
Good question. In his treatment of both Trina and Lila, Cole shows no self-control. So he's embarrassed afterwards – that's a point in his favour – but so far, I'm having difficulty seeing him as the 'hero' of this story.
Most authors make the guy's previous bedmate a total bitch (which is cool for plot but gets old quickly) it seems Lila wont be a problem! :)
a few technical problems. e.g. a synonym for 'rough' is 'coarse' - not 'course'. Better proofreading is hard to do - I admit. Please, please?
Um, Mizt, it's R O G U E. Not the stuff women use to make their cheeks look red.
now that we know about the rouge actually being the "Alpha" of the rouges, you have added so much more to the plot. What will Cole do when he learns of the plot? And oh yea, why doesn't Cole know his wolf is w/Karen? I like Lila. She has lost the benefits but still has the friend, an she's total ok w/that. And now the Alpha knows an enemy pack is on his land and he won't be able to just chase them away.
This chapter really set things into motion and have left me wanting more. So yes, I will be eagerly awaiting the next installment
Lila has revealed the plot that will make this story interesting, besides the fact
of Cole/Karen's sweet and erotic love story.
Again, more and sooooon. Thanks
vt