by lilgirlsix
COOL i am first to comment. I wanna know so badly what it is that makes the women special are they ALPHA females already. I think Carr should have let James and Sarah mate and more might have been shown.
Nobody thought to even ask about any other women that Gary was interested in as mates for his pack! It's a good thing that two escaped to get the word out!
Since Sarah was responding so favorably to James' advances, the alpha should let them mate at their own pace. Of course, neither know yet about the dreams she has had that have served to prepare her for this. I think those dreams are significant, and shouldn't be overlooked!
And the plot thickens.
Why didn't it occur to them (or me) about the other women.
Even heard the creepy sound at the end of this chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Love this series.
I have liked this story from the very beginning. It is moving along nicely, and I look forward for the next chapters. So many possibilities. I'm wondering if the women Gary chose are descendents of werecats. The way you emphasized that Karen became graceful after the mating, and Cole thought humans usally became more steathy (not graceful, necessarily) leads me to believe it's the case. Can't wait to find out.
Countrychic2014
yes you are. There has to be something special about these females for Gary and his group to have spent so much time with each girl. The rouges spent at least 6 months living w/the humans. Why so long? And why are the girls finding mates w/in the pack? You are keeping a secret that I think will change the story completely.
The deeper you get into your story, the more I want. The twists and turns have been so fun to read. And like I said you are keeping secrets. And those secrets keep me coming back for more.
Oh I want more! Such a good story. I wonder what is up with the women that Gary has chosen? You can so hear the "dun dun dun" music at the end... I can't wait for the next chapter....
Can't wait Can't wait want more, can't wait to see when gary and paul get there evil butts kicked. what is the secret of the girls in the cave and shara and karen i think it will be awsome like they can kick butt buy using there minds or something like that. keep up the good work. waiting for more.
what a cliffhanger! what's so special about the women???
and I REALLY like the fact that Karen squared Cheryl in the face!!!
Can't wait for the next one!
Please do not stop writing. If you were to stop here that would fall under cruel and unusual punishment. I am stuck thinking about this story at work all day then I rush home and look to see if any more have been posted.
as always thank you for writing. I really can't wait for the rest of the story >.<
I'm absolutely in love with this story. And go Karen :D, can't wait for more
why are Karen and Sarah so special. i am really confused and want to know what's going on!
Is Gary's Disorder (new in DSM-V ^^) catching or something? Now we've got Cheryl. Someting tells me that she's Gary's or Paul's mate. :P
I still have tears in my eyes from laughing while thinking about Karen punching Cheryl in the nose! Omg too funny!
i just come across this story on similar stories and started reading it out of bordem with the story i was reading but so far there is no chance of that happining now i can not wait to see what is so spiciel about the women that gary has picked
I have a feeling Karen's going to be a powerful wolf I mean look at how strong she is Now! I'm also thinking quite possibly Sarah as well I think there's were in their families lineage or maybe not. Looking Forward to finding out... Cheryl is one stupid wolf girl!!!