All Comments on 'Word Foreplay'

If the 'K' was already there before it got used for 'LICK', it would've had to be part of a previous word, and it wouldn't have been possible to use it for 'COCK' as well.

This could have been a very erotic story but I got turned off almost immediately. Adjectives with inappropriate meanings were used. The sentences were often poorly constructed. Better use of english grammer would have made this a very interesting and entertaining story. Please do an extensive edit and resubmit?

I see we have Scrabble experts here as well !!

Get a life boys, this isnt Shakespeare its hot story's.

More please more !!

You know if you're gonna leave a comment on Grammar you may as well spell the word right. As well as the fact that you usually capitalize English when using it. Also: Anonymous feedback should not be considered as a wise choice to stand behind and critique another's writing.

With that out of the way, the plot and intentions of this piece were mild at best. It was a little rush and forced - but works well as a porno's script. Slow build up and poor configuration made the read bland. A good editor would help with most of this. Don't let purely negative feedback damper you.