by SisiLala
this story is truly amazing BUT all of the mistakes I see really detract from the story! I hate when you use of instead of off and vice versa, along with the wrong to/too usage! Besides that the story is amazing and I can't wait to read more.
I seldom make negative comments publicly, but i mean this to be positive mainly. I am enjoying this story a lot, BUT the grammer, spelling, and typing errors interrupt the flow significantly :-(