by Jonnyflies
Ch 10 was better than this one. Sarah needs to invite her colleague to move in with her.
I'm so glad I found your story, and want to share it with my Mrs.
I'd love for the story to continue though. It leaves off in an awkward spot, and there's no resolution to the crisis. Some of the story future can be guessed or hoped at, but there's a lot of unknown, so I'll add my voice to ask that this story be continued.
Thanks for the terrific start!
Very well thought out, written and presented. I enjoyed it very much.