All Comments on 'Workplace Fun Ch. 02'

by easygoinguy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Vastly improved

This second chapter is much better than your first. Besides smoother prose and more graphic detail, you took your time with the sex and with a little more character buildup. Keep it going.

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
Verry good

Good writing and story.

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