All Comments on 'Yes, Sir'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Well written. Simple but with intensity. There were a couple personal non preference things that interupted the flow for me but the overall scene was good. I don't know what he was about to say that was cut off, but "Ba..." sounds rather sheepy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing!

Loved it!

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

...... Going to add a couple of comments here *5*

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