For Ranse

Poem Info
157 words
3.5
1.7k
0
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

Every time she is touched
By the restless forces-
Something within which is dark
And is enclosed in a outer shell
Brilliant,seemingly made of the Light

He must be Bacchus-of-the-mountain
And Byron-of-the-mountain
He must die young
And live in the utmost futility
He must move her
With slight secret smiles
And his eyes winking like
Extinguished stars behind
His fine veil of hair

The wanderer, he held her still
With his night dark eyes
First, everything was black,
Then Stars were hastily drawn in
But the stars didn't stop to notice
They were only a human's conception.

Now he Takes a slight reprieve
From the mundane motions
Of stumbling down the back roads
To think about she who
Disappeared behind the backbone
Of mountains once or twice

For once, it need not go unrequited;
She shares your restlessness, wanderer
All of it, she has swallowed down
It burns in her belly like a sun.
Live, Molten, Smoldering

Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
2 Comments
unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
I really liked this

Your imagery is strong and graceful, and you have a nice balance between the concrete and the abstract here. One tiny stylistic quibble, one that may be mine alone: I find the capitalization of each line a bit distracting; I think your lines would flow even better without it. Just a thought. Nice work, truly.

LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
██

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

<br>

<br>

<br>

════════════════

Share this Poem

Similar poems

I Say Nothing Person describes how his people think about the world.
Morning Wood a poem about morning wood, abstract and full of prose
More Stories