All Comments on 'From A Quiet Housewife To A Slut Ch. 02'

Great story, looking forward to more. How big are you going to stretch her cunt?

enjoyed pt1 and 2 liked the bit about the stretching of her nipples and clit hope things are gonna get a lot harder for her in the following chapters maybe bring a very hard sadistic mistress into it or master turn her into a slave

when can we expect the next chapter cant wait

wheres part 3

Hi Em!

Dawn here, we were chatting in MSN the other day! Just thought I'd let you know I read your story and absolutely loved it! I think you and I may have some similar kinks girlie! ;)

Luved the whole concept of getting done and examined like that at the Docs! :) I'm going to the Doctors tomorrow...hehe Nothing like that planned but you can hope hey?! hehe

Read it for a second time just now and could not resist getting my fave vibe out for a play!!! ;) I'm eagerly awaiting the third part! :)

Anyway I'll get back to it - but I'm sure I'll see you online sometime soon! :)

Ciao 4 Now!

Dawn xoxox

Much better now you're into the action. I think you should have written the dialogue more clearly, but the sex-action was quite hot. More needed!

loved the story, really want to read more.

i loved it dearly. i sent it to a couple of my friends and we all are waiting on chapter three to show up and see what happens next.

Amazing hot story, cant wait for part 3

i really loved the story, hope chapter 3 comes soon

nr. 3 coming ? hope you did not quit

A long time past, and an early sub. Mainly for writers and edit, I note, the hubby does not exist, is as lost as an atom in the body of a person. The story should have put him away on call/work/family visit. There are errors in the english, which even Word would have picked up. 2 things there; don't get hung up on such, I have worked as editor and compiler in a news setting and in my comment on the first part slipped a letter in a word. Such, because it fitted the tech grammer, but not sense, Word did not highlight. 2nd, such is nearly always to be seen as a failure of editing, or people who do not think they need an editor. Editing is like marriage, and agreement synthesis, at it's best. The final outcome a resolution of all contentions.

Hope the years have gone well and that since '11 you are otherwise happily engaged.