All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
very good writing!! can't wait to read more!

what else is there to say except please, please continue with this and SOON =)

milf26milf26almost 20 years ago
WOW!

don't leave us hanging very long! this is a great story...but are jake's intentions honorable or did he send the guy to rough up narissa? i'll keep an eye out for the next installment! great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
which jake?

story one has jake daniels this one has jake rivers???

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 14 years ago
very, very nice

this is really good so far, though i think the age gap is too big, 12-15 years wouldb have been fine.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

He is hot in the creepiest way

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