by Belegon
An ideal use of the Force, if you ask me (which you did). *wink* Delightful, as always.
I loved this story. I want more, more MORE!!!!!
~Honey
Well written, with your usual flair. I'm not much on fan fics, but this was worth my time :)
Nice story dude, but what would make this even better is when you show her entering his derams later that night, and then they meet fro a real sexual encounter
Brilliant writing! You really managed to capture the characters personalities. I loved the writing of your story as well as the "Jedi speech". Keep up the good work.
Fuck the Jedi council; mentally fuck that bitch jedi knights!
Dude, loved it. I always wondered what would happen if someone really could use the Force on other people. Make em cum I say!!!!
Bravo. Very nicely done. Characters dialogue was better than the films and the sexuality was subtle, classy, and yet steamy.