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The Fertility Clinic Ch. 08

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by JDseller08/11/05

AHHHHHHHHHHHH another pussy wimp in the making.

Isn't this so cute. Some dumb fucker that just has to be a fucking wimp. Ask any male that you know and see if they would stand for being treated like this???? He needs to dump the bitch as fast as he can. There are many women and men that would treat him far better that this bitch. If they like to be tessed so much let them do each other.

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by Anonymous08/11/05

Interesting twist

Now where is the rest of the story ;)

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by Anonymous08/12/05

that was unexpected...

Nice twist...classic teased & denied story. Is this the end? Hope to see a sequel soon.

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by Anonymous08/13/05

tease

Now, THAT was a tease!!

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by Anonymous08/13/05

Great ending

Peter, all your story endings are better than average, but this one is a classic.

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by Anonymous08/16/05

Top drawer!

Peter,
This was just a phenomenal series. I had blue balls just reading it.

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by Anonymous10/04/05

Your Best Story Yet!!

Peter, your stories are getting soooo good. The love between this couple, the context of their marriage, his willingness to give himself to her pleasure, all of these are wonderful elements. I so much want to hear more about this couple, from their evening with Doctor Tina and Shelly to the future of their marriage. The growth of this couple in new ways, her development as a loving overseer of his orgasm, and maybe his needed to be in chastity, is anticipated.

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by Anonymous11/11/07

Wow!

I think this is your best story. I particularly like the ending, a very nice twist!

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by thatoneguy6902/02/08

Fantastic

Absolutely fantastic. Keep up the good work!

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by Anonymous07/13/08

Kudo's!

well written, enough humor; just good reading.

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by Anonymous06/28/10

Frustrating, just plain frustrating

Although I did like the idea of a girl being in control for a while considering I am a girl myself, I didn't like how Joel wouldn't man up and just either walk away from Sally to prove she shouldn't be screwing with him like that and expect anything in return or he wouldn't just take what he wanted. I mean a man is a man and definitely shouldn't let a woman be in control for THAT long or he looks like a wimp in my eyes. and what kind of world do u live in where a woman would lie to her husband like that and everything would be ok? if I was Joel I'd divorce that twat in a second. and I definitely don't like how Dr.Jones wasn't really a real doctor trying to help and then Sally basically was whorin him around for the satisfaction of herself, she's a bitch nd doesn't care about her husband and should get bitch slapped and left once that baby is born cus she deserves it. don't get me wrong I did enjoy playing around while readigthis =] Joel just needs to grow balls and assert himself and say if I wanna jerk off I will cus u can't stop me! and if she threatens to deny orgasms he should threaden to cheat =] cus that's how the real world works hehe
I'm sorry that's so mean =] lol keep writing though cus ur stories are very good even if I hate the characters haha

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by Guitman6912/20/10

Great story

All I can say is fantastic story, and when are you going to write about what happened next? I want to see the story of the 3 of them going at him at once.

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