All Comments on 'Calista's Dungeon Ch. 02'

Hi ya,

Just finished reading and I wanted to say I like your series so far. Good scene setting, realistic dialogue, and so very hot. My only issue was the adjectives. Sudsy and frothy belong to dishes and other things soapy, not bodily fluids. At least not in my opinion. But a good read otehrwise. Also, make sure you check your apostrophe use.

Nice! I would like a woman to bind me, spank me, and clamp and torture my sensitive nipples like that!