by LitEroCat
Good to read a hopeful tale for us old farts. I like the twist and nested story. Is there more cumming like this?
This is an extremely well-crafted story.
I gave it the highest rating possible and feel
everyone else should have also.
Being sixty years of age helped me relate to the
old man's situation. So, perhaps younger readers
just failed to appreciate Art's victories on the
train and during the ensuing years.
Please keep up the good work.