by RobXXX
I really liked the previous chapters, however, this sort of stuff really turns me off. I hope the next isn't so brutal.
i have read things that were rougher then this and gave it higher ratings it just feels like you are getting bored with it and the writing is getting sloppy so the story line loses its appeal and effect. you could have written the same story better and recieved higher reviews even from those that dont like forced sex.
READING THE STORIES WHEN IWAS YOUNGER I WOULD LIKED TO BE MADE TO DO THINGS LIKE THAT.