All Comments on '31st Century Warrior's Woman Ch. 02'

Its about time Maggie accepted her husband! lol Now i cant wait for them to actually.... umm... 'get it on' lmao! :) You did a great job with this chapter, and i do hope you can continue with the next chapter right away.

Again you have a great storyline, but the editing is so bad that it is hard to finish reading it. You leave out words that should be included and put in words that shouldn't even be there. The puncuation also still needs work. I don't mean to sound nasty because I really do say this from a good place. I just want to help you. You do have potential. Just think a little more carefully before you submit your story to make sure it has all its grammar and punctuation correct. If you can learn to do that you will be absolutely great, I know it.

Hi this is the author of 31st Century warrior's woman. As you may know I've just entered Uni :s in doing so I purchased a laptop and being the airhead that I am, I left the rest of this story on my computer back at home, so it may be a long time for the following chapters to appear, but I guarantee that the next chapter will appear around early November. Until then i do have other stories on my pen drive that i will be putting up on literotica :D x

it's past early november! i'm super excited for the rest of this story are you still going to keep posting?

it's past early november! i'm super excited for the rest of this story are you still going to keep posting?