All Comments on 'Carrie Heffernan's Strip Debut'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
misleading

it was ok as far as it went, but she didn't make her debut as a stripper in the story. finish it please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good!

I really enjoyed it - I could totally hear Carrie and Doug talking and the bj scene was just as I would have imagined between those two and yet hot at the same time. Hope you continue the story!

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