All Comments on 'Whispers of the Moon Ch. 03'

Your back!! Hurray!!! Great chapter I can't wait for the next one.

I love the whole story :) from beginning to the end. Took a while for this chapter please don't keep us waiting so long again can't wait to see what you have planned

Love it!

The story is good. I do have one negative. You are interchanging the names of Carson and Cable. I can figure out who it is supposed to be but it does detract a little.

i am glade this story is back i really liked it, but the proof reading needs work. u got Carson and Gabe mixed up at least once.

What an awesome start to this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming.

Can't wait for the next chapters!

Please please can u add more to this great story.

This story is to good to let go by the boards, I hope you chose to finish it.

I like this 1 better than the first 1 only by a bit because it had a bit more detail and explained a little better what was happening

Honestly I say that I do like the first better just plot wise but I think the second explains things more and flows nicer. If you could combine the two that'd be good but I'm kinda leaning toward the first. Either way I think that after everything skylars been through she is moving into being ok with the relationship too fast. Keep the story coming no matter which ch 3 you choose. Good luck abd thanks

i tend to like this one better because there are a few more details and the character insight is better.

Cant wait for the nest chapters.

How long is it going to take to finsh this wonderful story going by the date this was posted it will never get finished. I am so sick of getting into a story only to find no ending.

I havnt read the old version of this chapter but i like this one.Please continue with this story.

i like the second version.. better character development and details:) i really enjoy your writing, i cant wait to read the rest of this story

please post the next chapter soon... don't keep us hanging for too long... the story is so good...

Interesting, and well written. Can't wait to see what develops.

I thoughly enjoyed reading your story, although you may want to go back and edit the bit that said...

(Oh my god is that really me? Skyler thought looking into the mirror. Her hair was pale and her face was covered in bruises,)

I think it should have read her face was pale and her body was covered in bruises as I have never seen hair go pale (unless you dye it) LOL

Thank you willieone for posting that comment as soon as i have finished and submitted chapter 4 i will fix it.

when are you going to post the next chapter? can't wait to read it

If Skyler turns out to be something more than just an ordinary human, she could have some very interesting capabilities as a were should she be turned. It's early in the story, so you have a lot of directions you could branch off in. I'm enjoying what you have done so far with their resistance of each other. It makes the moment they finally give in to one another that much sweeter. Good job!

i love it! i want to know what happens next!!! please post the next chapter ASAP!!!

I really enjoyed this. More please!!!!!

please write the next chapter.. it was so great.. i keep coming back on this page to see if you posted a new chapter... please post soon... i can't wait

when is the next chapter gong out? you should write more... it's a great story... can't wait for your next chapter

I really enjoyed your story and can't wait for you to put more out!

I love your story, so good!!! Please write more...soon! I too keep coming back to check to see if you've added more!

I adore the characters and the plot as a whole. Please, please, please, please post more to the story!!! And soon if possible!

I want more of this story... Jessie and Cable and all of it...

WHAT IS Skyler?!

great story when will there be more

you said there's more... please... where are chapters 4 and 5

please let there be more. i like everything so far. i keep coming back and rereading it hoping to find more of the store.

This story is starting to get good. Hope everything ia going well cause i cant wait to read the rest of tge story. Keep it coming!

the story is turning out fanomanal and i cant wait to see what happens between both couples... andfind out what skylar really is

omg u can't just start a start a story then cut it off like that especially if it's this good you just gotta finish

I'm not sure if i am mistaken and I'm thinking of a different story, but i swear I've read the start of this before, only it was complete??? If anyone knows what I'm talking about i would really like to locate it.

I like where you are going with this. Carson reminds me of a man I knew in grad school. Same laid back kinda way...always intrigued me. Please keep going maybe I'll see my old chum between the lines.

Please finish this story LOL

please finish the story

I am hopeful for more of the story. Please say there will be more of the story. I want to know what happens next.

Thank you for writing, please continue.

this is a great beginning, please continue this story!

Where's it at?????

Please come back and write more!

i can't wait for the next ones. i am on the edge of my seat.

I would love it if you were able to finish your story!

More please this is a great story.

Please, please finish your story!

Ok this is a great story and I can't wait to see what comes next. DON'T LEAVE ME HANG!!

Hey, i am loving your writing.don't forget about this book.your gaining fans fast.

Please continue

the story's great so far! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Last chapter written in Oct 2009. It is now Dec 2015. What's going on? Where's more?

There is so much potential here, please continue. I'll keep checking for new chapters.

Is this all that there is for the story?

Please finish this story, it's soooo good!

Since it has been 8 years since you posted this chapter I gather you are joining the ranks of the never to be finished stories like so many others on this site. Such a shame it was a really good read.

I like how it's started. Really hope you finish the story.