All Comments on 'Mated Forever Ch. 05-08'

You have a very good plot, but it is hard to follow, as the reader can't tell what is being said by whom. when you characters are having a conversation, you don't let the readers know who is saying what. It distracts from the story, which is wonderful otherwise. Honestly, I ended up getting so frustrated that I just had to stop reading.

Also, don't worry about writing in the 3rd person, as others suggested in previous chapters. I think the story flows well with Ella's perspective in place. (just stop putting Ella's POV at the start of every chapter, please. )

Waiting not so patiently for another chapter. :)

The story started off well enough but has meandered a little. The story is interesting, I hope you work it out.

I enjoyed this story and want to see more. Its fun and sexy. Will i bother reading it again in the future - hell yeah!

So I repeat the title, more please. Needs to continue/be finished, its worth it.