All Comments on 'Stranger in the Store'

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kingleonidasskingleonidassalmost 13 years ago
Sounds very real

From the story I think it's first hand knowledge. Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent

A few typos, but the tempo was so HOT and furious that I doubt any reader gives a damn ;-)

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