All Comments on 'Bloody Vampires! Ch. 03'

by GeorgeTasker

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice one

Little low on the sex, but still an amazing story! Shows your quality as a writer.

mavir9mavir9about 12 years ago
Looks Promising

I like it so far, can't wait for the next chapter

brian358brian358about 12 years ago

Thanks for another great chapter!

As previously mentioned, low on sex but a good development of the story, and it introduced us to the lovely Sharon!

I hope Danny & Sharon get it on. They deserve it! :-)

Soebek110Soebek110about 12 years ago
Excellent again!

More good work from you! I'm enjoying this series immensely.

One thing I noticed - you mentioned early in the story that Sharon had deep red hair, but later on (when he's groping her tit outside of the t-shirt) you describe her as blonde:

"Danny gave a blissful groan as the busty blonde squeezed his hard-on."

Just a small thing! Excellent stories!

TheBlackMagicianTheBlackMagicianabout 12 years ago
Holy ****!

What a surprising ending! I loved it. And the scene in the club was super hot. I hope he gets to spend a little more time with Sharon - I think she was getting him to grope her a little more than she needed to, so maybe she secretly liked it! It'd be nice to see those tits swinging free! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Reminds me of . . .

The Jimbo Bond series. I like the new characters and am eager to see where this one goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yay!!!!

GT Rulez!!!!

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