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Sailing With Friends

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/26/12

where are all the 'sailing references'?....

The only reference to sailing was a boat, well, OK, 2 boats.
Besides all the periods that are missing (way beyond 'run on sentences'), the point of the story seems to be missing also.

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by Mandyxxx4211/26/12

This is only the first chapter of a story.
The story will unfurl in future chapters rendering the title and apology appropriate.
Sorry if this wasn't clear to you.

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by john194611/26/12

Potential

The set up lends itself to a reat story. I look forward to it.

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by Anonymous11/27/12

Good start

Hope the next chapter develops this story as it has potential

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by josephstevens11/27/12

Next Instalment!

Make it quick, lady, this is going to be a good ride. Sorry, 'sail'...anyway, I'm sure we will all enjoy the rocking boat...

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by 12/02/12

great start!

I'm having a hard time visualizing what the characters look like, but the groundwork has been laid for a fine vacation!

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