by Littleblackdress54
There's something about your style of writing that really makes me want to actually read the story. Great job, really amazing.
Plus, I really want to know how it's going to continue - I don't want to rush you, but please hurry!
well done ,this is better than the first chapter and i want to read more please
I think that if Alice fell in love with Kenny and stopped fucking Greg and mark it would be a more orginial idea. I mean its would be cool because everyone does the "slut crossdresser" so the faithful one for a change would've been a great touch
I liked the story but fuck that asshole mark. What a dick. He needs to get punched in the nads.
You describe the approach of Greg 👦🏻 and Mark 🧑🏻 to Ethan-Alice 🧒🏻👧🏻 in an interesting way, you show two different approaches. Greg is romantic and sees Ethanie-Alice someone close and even love... 👨❤️👨 Mark seems to be without emotions, feelings 🖤 and only interested in sex. 👅🍦💋
I wonder if Kenn 👱🏻♂️ will get involved in all this and discover who Alice really is?
How will she relate to this and will she accept Ethan as Alice 🧒🏻👧🏻.
My thoughts 🤔 , imaginations swirl around Ethan-Alice, I embody with this person a lot. I want to be like Ethan-Alice. Best regards SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 🧒👧📝❤️👱🏻♂️🧑🏻
Ciekawie opisujesz podejście Grega 👦🏻 i Marka 🧑🏻 do Ethana-Alice 🧒🏻👧🏻, pokazujesz jakby dwa odmienne podejścia. Greg jest romantyczny i widzi Ethanie-Alice kogoś bliskiego, a nawet miłość ... 👨❤️👨 Zaś Mark jakby był bez emocji, uczuć 🖤 a jedynie intereuje go tylko seks.👅🍦💋 Ciekawe czy w to wszystko wmiesza się Kenn 👱🏻♂️ i odkryje kim tak naprawdę jest Alice? Jak dotego się odniesie i czy zaakceptuje Ethana jako Alice 🧒🏻👧🏻.
Moje myśli 🤔, wyobrażenia wirują wokół Ethana-Alice, bardzo uosobiam się z tą osobą. Chcę być jak Ethana-Alice. Pozdrawiam Serdecznie SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 🧒👧📝❤️👱🏻♂️🧑🏻
In chapter 1 you Ethan/Alice says Mark is his best friend, now he is just basically an acquaintance?
Nice story setting up chapter 3. Not as hot as chapter 1 but still well written and had my attention.
Your story is so real. I feel like I know the characters and enjoy reading what they feel.