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by BlissMara

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Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

An intimate 19 minutes of longing and desire.

Powerful images, sensuously portrayed.

Well done!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 2 years ago

The emotional abyss of longing for something out of reach, well-painted with words of dark colors.

Thanks for sharing.

elizalooelizalooalmost 2 years ago

I feel every agonizing minute that passes while you hunger and ache....

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 2 years ago

Really well done. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

TheDokTheDokalmost 2 years ago

The bliss and pain of being human

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 1 year ago

Distance, when hearts should be beating against each other through ephemeral skin.

compersionimmersioncompersionimmersionover 1 year ago

The symmetry of grey clouds and water beside a wasted desert town-- I identify with this so much. Lovely poem! please keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this one. Xx

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Writing is my passion, my solace, my relaxation, and my joy. I enjoy reading others' writings, and watching their processes unfold and transform. We gain skill, breadth, and creative reach in our craft from one another; supporting, coaxing, and encouraging.