All Comments on 'a brother's confusion'

Never read another poem of yours, this is the first one and I liked it very much.

Just relaxing incest away from the hassles of life. I felt that the weight of the poem is concentrated on the tits of the narrator more than in other parts of her anatomy, so there may be a question of balance, but don't take it too seriously cause balance is a creators prerogative.

Well done!

5ed

All part of the plan,trust me...thanx so much for commenting.@ pelegrino

Sucking good meaty verse. . .and the mighty breasts are tops.

Yeah they are the tops....looking to be the sub to a top....