All Comments on 'A Letter To Santa'

by RiverMaya

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Bebop3Bebop3over 3 years ago

I wish I had your talent. Merry Christmas!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

A box full of emotions: humor, romance, sadness, yearning.

A heartbreaking wish list, that flowed nicely too.

Thanks for sharing not only with the big belly man

chastenchastenover 3 years ago

That was an excellent poem.

Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

Sweet!

A painful year, wrapped in longing.....

PickFictionPickFictionover 3 years ago
Great

Excellent poem. I loved it.

MsCherylTerraMsCherylTerraover 3 years ago

Such a classic style and yet you made it your own. Love this poem! Amazing job.

SleeperyJimSleeperyJimover 3 years ago
Dammit...

...RiverMaya, stop bringing a tear to my eye with your poetry. I'm too manly for that. But it was really fun.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I absolutely love this!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yipey! You did it again!

Silly funny tender moving ... All rolled into one like a Christmas present !

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years agoAuthor
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Once again, thank you, thank you and thank you. Merry Christmas to you all! <3

Wark2002Wark2002about 2 years ago

It’s a fun poem but it also has the phrasing and quietness of Emily Dickinson - all it needed was the dashes

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1