All Comments on 'A Mirror Cannot Love'

I liked this. It made me think. I think the poem would have been better without the last two stanzas. In that manner, at least in my reading, the mirror could have stood alone as an image or as a metaphor for our self-talk, the latter more appealing to me, particularly because of the way you had it speak, which I thought was very effective.

Thanks for posting it.

IT shows while you only Perceive. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Lovely writing, liked this a lot

Though I can't help thinking of those lying mirrors you get at a fairgrounds lol

It was a good start I'll give you that but unfortunally it was runined by just one line.

"You cry. Has my love, clear has me, failed?" HUH????????