All Comments on 'At first glance'

I loved to hear,

in rhymes, about

what has become

of two, turned out

to make a sum

of wink and tear

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Thanks for sharing

Profound and deep. Very moving, thank you.

That didn't go where I expected and that reflects well on the author. Your poems get better and better x

At first I was amused, thinking it was just an anecdote. It was not what I was expecting. Thank you.