All Comments on 'avalanche'

Thank you.

Ice this is the best of the day for me. Made me smile in a sad way. I can identify.

the welling up is contageous, Ice. Not close, but there. Thank you. You made me, once again, look at life from a different place.

the incredible power of life, new life. In tiny fingers the world is held. You express it so well here, the deep emotion in your words shines a light, melts the ice. gripping poem, well done.

jim : )

Good, bad, happy, sad...

Raw and real and definitely moving. All extremes of emotion are present and the confusion adds to the clarity somehow. Beautiful words, beautiful heart.

~lucky

The helplessness of that special creature - the parent - ever vigilant to a baby's never ending needs.

An endearing picture ~ a tiny baby's fingers grasping a Mother's hair.

this poem is filled with emotion and makes one think.