All Comments on 'Beneath the Towers'

she trod into the future. TK U MLJ LV NV

The imagery in this rendering was just outstanding. Very enjoyable.

POW ~ this has got really powerful impact with imagery that keeps your eye on her final walk.

Good poetry is great exercise for the mind, and my mind just had a great work out.

Love those last two strophes in particular!

Fly

The imagry was wonderful in this. It's short but says a lot. There is easily enough here to write a story from.

You have a nice easy style!

"they ignored her

dune climb as the black

beach bogged her footprints."

I could totally see this, and it reads wonderfully

makes a big impact within its small compass

the better of the two, this one has arresting images