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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

The summer was not a bitter one

if you nibbled from the sweet berries

and took care of the apples to come

The summer was not a cold one

if you tended the fire not alone

and kept a match to reignite

The summer was not a wasted one

if you made memories of joy

to recall with a smile and no regret

The summer will go

fall to come

spring never endless

winter won't too

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I could really feel the meaning behind this, good job <3

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Update - 2nd May Thank you all for your wonderful support for my little writing hobby. My schedule has cleared up quite nicely for the foreseeable future, so I should be able to pump a few out a good few chapters before the summer when I will be taking a little break for my v...

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