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by Zandrite

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Excellent flow, loved the structure of the stanzas, and very much the interweavement of body and soul, both satisfied.

Thanks for sharing and looking forward to your next one.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

well said - I agree with 29

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

Well said with good flow, interesting and consistent structure and rhyme and erotic too! I chose your poem for mention in the New Poem Recommendations Section of the Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum (https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=25). Please browse through the forum and join us if it's to your liking.

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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what you’ve read. I’m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...