All Comments on 'For Awhile'

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
drifting

The sad fact of life ~ sometimes those who are close ~ over distance and time ~ drift apart.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit with this excellent description of the love of two people as their lives take separate paths; one accepts what happens, the other wants things to go on as before...

serendipity_lostserendipity_lostabout 17 years ago
simply beautiful...

This poem just went straight to my heart strings..it was just simply beautiful..

Joe WordsworthJoe Wordsworthover 16 years ago
Ill Equipped

I'm not really very good at reading poetry... just not well equipped to appreciate it.

I liked this, I just didn't really connect to it--more "me" than "you" on that.

Gi_VenusGi_Venusover 16 years ago
The sadness of love

This played on my memories of love that could not be.

The sorrow that life brings to us in that thing called unrealized love....it lingers in all of us.

kimbaleekimbaleeabout 16 years ago
liked it, but sad

certainly stirs up emotions, doesn't it? sad, but it happens whether we like it or not.

pamelacdnzpamelacdnz8 months ago

been there, suffered that

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Many moons ago a story took shape and begged to be born. However, the characters took control and the story made a completely unexpected and surprising crossdressing turn...and I went with it. Readers enjoyed it so I did some lather, rinse repeat on the theme and they seemed t...

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