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Maria2394Maria2394almost 11 years ago
I didn't vote...

but I do want to say that your work is promising. One bit of advice I would give you ( that was given me ten years ago) ____ who is/are "they"?

Words such as they make your poem weak because readers seem to enjoy poetry/prose with more certainty than you have given us.

I wish you the best and while you are here, take advantage of the enormous amount of talent you have access to. Best Wishes and Keep on Writing!!!!

~maria

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