All Comments on 'lapis lazuli'

Who can resist a gibbous, middle-aged moon? You create a wonderful sense of a twilight state, somewhere I guess between desire and ennui, and make it sound so attractive. :-)

Your poem has been recommended in today's New Poem Reviews on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.

You have a careful, intelligent and detailed voice. I like most of your work, but this one caught my eye particularly. Well done.