All Comments on 'Life's Journey'

by SmoochingSamantha

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
life's journey.......

.... tie two birds together and though they have four wings they can not fly... and in the evenings the dove's sing of the love they had, hoping they will find them again... (I enjoyed your poem) (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Such yearning,

You sound so troubled but a beautifully written piece; full of soul searching passion & feelings. Well done ;)

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