All Comments on 'Our Yard Looks Fantastic'

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vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Grim stuff. I love the gardening/armageddon theme, but I would never have put it together myself, but you've done it well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Suggestion:

the water sits stagnant; the sun settles beyond our grasp.

Five.

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Single female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...