All Comments on 'Please Hurt Me'

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molineuxmolineuxover 10 years ago
Well written -

Just wish I understood the fun of hurting or being hurt. 5ed, though.

coyote3kcoyote3kover 10 years ago
just beautiful

This is great! It leaves me wanting to know more. Will you ever be satisfied? Hurt enough? Maybe temporarily. You seem about to get what you want at the end.

The repetition of your plea is very powerful, a deep need that must be addressed. This is a beautiful piece.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman5 months ago

Why do you need to be hurt?

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