All Comments on 'Purgatory'

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MsCherylTerraMsCherylTerraalmost 4 years ago

Beautiful. Sincere and evocative.

PickFictionPickFictionalmost 4 years ago

Very nice. Haiku isn't my favorite form but this is well done.

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 4 years ago

Very nice indeed. Much better than any poetry I could create.

tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
IF ON AN ELEVATOR THEY ARE ENTWINED

elevators and escalators go up and down. TK U MLJ LV NV

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I'm about 55,000 words into Secondhand Hearts, a new story in the Hop on the Bus series. If I can figure out a way to post it here without it being stolen and posted on Amazon, I should have it ready in about a week or so. There's someone who has stolen about eight of my stor...