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wakingDownwakingDownalmost 9 years ago
Multi-fold in its deepening troubles

The long-standing aggression and resentment is palpable and vehement. It would seem that there are no innocent parties here, that everyone is to blame in some way for something, much as it is life. The transformation of the ending of stanzas three, five, and six is small but potent, giving an evolution to the overall picture presented that makes the whole work all the more powerful.

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