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LostLittleLambLostLittleLambalmost 4 years ago

The first line reminded me of "She Walks in Beauty in the Night" by Lord Byron. I very much enjoyed this poem. It has a little awkward moment with

"Faded memories of joy and pain

Are all too welcomed again and again"

I had to read the second line a couple times before I realized you meant the faded memories. However, it was still a pleasurable read.

DessertmanDessertmanalmost 2 years ago

It could be made to scan better with a different choice of words.

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